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18 February 2004

Issue No. 28

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This edition is going to look at Writing Good Real Estate Ads - and what it can do for your business!

 

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10 Tips for Writing Great Real Estate Ads

by Narelle Stratford & Dennis McMahon

 

We passed a Property sign the other day that included the words "Architecturally Designed", and that prompted the question "What's the benefit for the buyer?"  We were hard pressed to find the benefits as we have seen some architectural disasters - and the memory of those overrides the great architectural designs that must be out there.

 

When writing real estate signs or advertisements, there is a formula you can follow:

 

1. Attention - Attract the attention of the reader with a good headline

2. Interest - Maintain their interest or pique their curiosity with the benefits of the property.

3. Desire - whet their appetite for more

4. Action - Make sure that they respond to the ad with a Call to Action; they pick up the phone or come and see you straight away.

 

Think about this for a specific property, and next time you are writing an ad, ask yourself these questions:

  • Who is my target market? Or, what is my profile of my ideal buyer?  What kind of person will love this property?    

  • Does my headline attract my target market and hold their attention?

Maintain interest through whetting the imagination with the benefits of the property.  Ask yourself:

  • What are the benefits of living in this home or unit?  Benefits (B) are often the intangibles versus the concrete features (F).  

For example: 

  • 3 bedrooms (F) gives lots of space (B); 

  • Timber deck (F) equates to a cool entertainment area (B); 

  • Big shed (F) equals a place for Big boys and toys to play (B); 

  • Gourmet kitchen (F) should read "anyone easily creates gourmet delicacies" (B) for sumptuous eating pleasure (B); 

  • Open plan living (F) usually means spaciousness (B).

For an investor, you might want to focus on the features, rather than the benefits.  

  • Does the property give rental yield or capital growth?  And write that into the ad - tell your potential investor what they want to know.  Then do the sums and have the answers ready when someone calls you.  If it's negatively geared, which investors will it suit, if any?

  • What potential benefits are there?  Is this a property that can be subdivided?  Is it zoned Res B and suitable for a home office?

Build Desire into your ad, through one or more of the four mediums: 

1. A sense of urgency - Vendor needs to sell because...; 

2. Popularity - will appeal to all buyers looking for...; 

3. Scarcity - one of a kind because of this price, this location, this....; 

4. Words that evoke feelings and the imagination - 'the spaciousness lets you relax so easily'.   

 

Be truthful in your descriptors though, because if you are doing your job properly, buyers will want to do business with you in the future.

 

1. Conclude your ad by telling readers what to do:  

Call Narelle NOW on ...; 

Email me and quote No. 1234; 

Come and see me today at xy address.  

Don't rely on readers knowing that they need to contact you, tell them to do it, so that it acts as a conscious command to them, if they are even slightly interested.

 

2. Whenever you can, think of ways to make your ads funny, quirky and interesting.  Here are some headlines:

  • Almost Deceased Estate

  • Only Thongs Needed

  • You'll never see him Again

  • Something Smells Fantastic

  • Huge Home Fits Everyone

  • Great Rental Returns

A great book that you should read is called "Bugger the Real Estate Agents, I'll sell it Myself" by RJ Semple.  It has pages of great ads already written, and you could learn even more about what clients are looking for in their real estate agent.

 

Have you written some great ads that got great responses?  Care to share them?  Send them to us and we can compile a resource page (or more) to provide to everyone and help make life easier.

 


Just for something different, and a smile, here are some of MURPHY’S Law of Contact (of Murphy's Law fame) 

  • If the enemy is in range, so are you.

  • Incoming fire has the right of way.

  • Don't look conspicuous, it draws fire.

  • There is always a way.

  • The easy way is always mined.

  • Try to look unimportant, they may be low on ammo.

  • Professionals are predictable, it's the amateurs that are dangerous.

  • The enemy invariably attacks on two occasions: a. When you're ready for them. b. When you're not ready for them.

  • Teamwork is essential, it gives them someone else to shoot at.

  • If you can't remember, the claymore is pointed at you.

 


 

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Until next time, enjoy this quote - and the first one to tell me who said it will win a fantastic Business Report (valued at $59) called Writing Good Real Estate Ads to help you really sell!

Who said this? "If men can run the world, why can't they stop wearing neckties? How intelligent is it to start the day by tying a little noose around your neck?"

 

(That is so true, particularly with the heat in Brisbane last week!)

 

Last week we asked you, who said this?

"One hundred percent of the shots you don't take don't go in." 

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